A great start.
The song itself works very well but you need a lot of work on balancing and leveling. It also seems like you need to ground this with a beat of some sort. It's really light and just flying everywhere in the air, if you know what I mean.
To answer the question about the "sandstorm noise" - If you are using a program (such as a VST synthesizer or effect) and it's an unregistered/demo version, many people make it randomly generate noise. This way, only registered users/customers will be able to make full use of it. I'm nearly 100% sure that's the case here. The only ways around this are to either completely omit using it, or to purchase it.
Thank you ^^
Yes, this sucks, just like the rest of your music. This is just an annoying lead synth with some very crappy samples sprinkled on top.
Not only are you lacking severely in quality, but you insist on going around to other peoples' songs and leaving shitty and pointless reviews when you aren't even capable of backing yourself up.
The Audio Portal is full of thankless retards like you who make this place SUCK. In fact, I think I'm the one who approved you for Audio Portal submission when you first submitted, and yet, here you are saying my music sucks. Not only is the song of mine you reviewed over 2 and 1/2 years old, but it's still better than your stupid crap.
Don't quit making music just yet, though. You're going SOMEWHERE with this. Just don't be an asshole and make a lot of enemies along the way. People will appreciate what you do more
yo man wussup,
yea man, i made this in like 30 mins so its gonna suck, but i dont make music taht ppl can listen to all the time, i make it for their falshs, and tahts what the audio portal is for. Its cool to have some real time music, i just got my new equiptment and ill be beastin. I ain tryin to make enemies, giving my opinion seems to be a lil to much for ppl to handle tho, ill suck up on that. Dude your music is nice, ive downloaded some of it too, but i download it to listen to in the car and headphones n stuff. Yea the rest of my music is a lead synth, actually its the same one for almost all of them, but i try to mix it uup a bit, i can tell you probably voted 0 on all my songs but you might not of.
We all have our own styles in music, you like new age trance techno dance stuff like that i dunno. But im into more of euro music, and my new equiptment is from europe.
i wouldnt consider myself a thankless retard, im really generous, i either vote 5 or 3 never 0,2, or 1. 4 if mkts ok. Dude im also 13! so probly lots of my music is gunna suck but at least ive got 1 download so my music dont totally suck, just think, my good stuff is yet to come, so dont totally dis me right now ill be back better than ever and maybe ill be famous, but i doubt it i never usually seem to have good luck.
It's not bad.
Just watch how much you lean on FL demo files =)
You're now cleared for audio submission, but I suggest that you try to be a little more original next time.
This song borrows heavily off of Inginer's "Vocal sounds" FL demo song. Try not to do that next time.
yeh, man i was hoping no one would notice, i just realy wanted to get sumthin up quik, me stealing sumone elses work? well u know wat they say, crime doesnt pay
Hey, it's not that bad
It's not bad, but you used the same file as Toby's Raindrops to get your synths and drum beat.
Is this necessary? You seem to have decent skills to make music, but this song leans too much on that other song. Get something original going.
I was disappointed
I really agree with DJ_Draconum, you need to use more than FL 3xOSC presets, those sounds you used are well...they could be better...try getting a handle on using these synthesizers, it's just as important as the notes that make up your song.
The structure of the song was decent, but I don't think that it has that true remix feel to it
But what can I say, you tried well (I assume), and this could still be some good audio to put in a flash movie.
I might as well try out the review system...
...by saying that your work is great! Keep it up, you've provided some great audio for many animators.
Yeah finally we can respond to the Audio reviews :)
Your music is also dope man but I think I've allready told you that?
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